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Wednesday 7 April 2010
another idea
Ok, this is another rough spread i'm thinking of doing, tried to keep the detail there but it's a bit simpler than the other one, is that going to be a problem? I'm having some problems trying to make the other images look as good as my first one!
i dont think theres a massive difference between ur pieces. youve changed the right side piece where the bears legs are hanging off the end which looks better. i think theyre well balanced, none of the important parts are too close to the edge and again relaly nice finishing and attention to detail like thoe wooden peer things in the background of the first one. gold star nice one
Yeh i really like the detail in your work, especially the footprints and the scales on the fish on the left page. The subtle colour palette works really well too.
i dont think theres a massive difference between ur pieces. youve changed the right side piece where the bears legs are hanging off the end which looks better. i think theyre well balanced, none of the important parts are too close to the edge and again relaly nice finishing and attention to detail like thoe wooden peer things in the background of the first one. gold star nice one
ReplyDeleteYeh i really like the detail in your work, especially the footprints and the scales on the fish on the left page. The subtle colour palette works really well too.
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