hey vicki the first thing that struck me was that i was reading it backwards from right to left... i would tery just mirroring the image and see how it looks. I like the text though and your expressions are bang on. it would be wicked to see how it looks if you tried it in watercolour- i think your wassercoloure freddie was better than the coloured pencil one. if only we had a few extra days with this, could have posted it! *SIGH* x
thanks!yes i see .. ill have another bash. although the text on the right relates to whats on the next page, and 'a frog' relates from the previous spread. or did u already know that and mean that the text on the right stands out more than the left??x
:( awww. well, hanna said that u cud like...go to the post office monday and pay to have it delivered on the same day if you wanted to enter 8) maybe its worth enquiring about x
oh no my bad!!! sorry i read it as if the the text on the right is followed by the frog. *retard* nah it makes sense forget about the mirroring thing but yeah i deff think your watercolour was strong, if you have time to develop that side would look mint. good luck in your interview tomorrow. im not gonna be flashy and come in a suit... getting dropped off in a limousine will have to do.
I think the gutter is a bit off centre but that wont take long to fix. just wondering what everyone thinks really. Thanks!
hey vicki the first thing that struck me was that i was reading it backwards from right to left... i would tery just mirroring the image and see how it looks. I like the text though and your expressions are bang on. it would be wicked to see how it looks if you tried it in watercolour- i think your wassercoloure freddie was better than the coloured pencil one. if only we had a few extra days with this, could have posted it! *SIGH* x
ReplyDeletethanks!yes i see .. ill have another bash. although the text on the right relates to whats on the next page, and 'a frog' relates from the previous spread. or did u already know that and mean that the text on the right stands out more than the left??x
ReplyDeletelooking gggewd. love the colors and the expression. and freddies brattyness teheh
ReplyDeletedid u and milan post on time!!! 8D
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no :o( we thought we could submit by email but apparently not so its a bit poo
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:( awww. well, hanna said that u cud like...go to the post office monday and pay to have it delivered on the same day if you wanted to enter 8) maybe its worth enquiring about x
ReplyDeleteiam not entirly sure about it though
ReplyDeleteyeah, milan found out - its £140 to send same day delivery. :o/
ReplyDeletewooaH LOL!!! i never thought it cud be that much me and hanna thought itd be like..£3 or summat xx
ReplyDeleteoh no my bad!!! sorry i read it as if the the text on the right is followed by the frog. *retard* nah it makes sense forget about the mirroring thing but yeah i deff think your watercolour was strong, if you have time to develop that side would look mint. good luck in your interview tomorrow. im not gonna be flashy and come in a suit... getting dropped off in a limousine will have to do.
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