clever, clever! Single scene, two time spaces with the character from the first page having landed in the second - very clever :)
Also, didn't want to comment on the first page, as I thought it was a step back in composition, but with the addition of the second page I see that you still got it :)
on more critical inspection it's like you half did the seem-less scene? Plus no more complete flat ons please - part of the character can be flat on if you must, but you should really make parts of the body in three quarter - you do make ever so small an angle with the body and arms, but this is very slight - every time people draw flat ons it belies their lack in confidence in drawing characters :(
clever, clever! Single scene, two time spaces with the character from the first page having landed in the second - very clever :)
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on more critical inspection it's like you half did the seem-less scene? Plus no more complete flat ons please - part of the character can be flat on if you must, but you should really make parts of the body in three quarter - you do make ever so small an angle with the body and arms, but this is very slight - every time people draw flat ons it belies their lack in confidence in drawing characters :(
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