for those helplessly addicted to picture book illustration & narrative
id say that my eyes get draw to the 'said' first, and then i loose all direction of what the sentance says. i think the words look a little too mixed up. but i think its a matter of opinion :) i do like the textures in the speech bubble. and the style too
some good points there cherry. For me the whale is not interesting enough still as an aesthetic object - I'm not feeling the characteristics of the whale enough - if that makes sense :) - actually it looks a bit like a blue goldfish??
Fair points guys! Thankyou!I shall have a re-draw!Lou xx
your texts really nice but don't understand the sentance =]