tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6207473389012123894.post4447083708431858507..comments2023-05-18T08:22:13.717-07:00Comments on Picture Books Anonymous: First page for freddieChiuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13375137598312709642noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6207473389012123894.post-30113453952434751882009-05-14T16:38:00.000-07:002009-05-14T16:38:00.000-07:00actually yeah i dint realise that- his shnozzle is...actually yeah i dint realise that- his shnozzle is a little off. yeah i might try that with the type- i took some cheeky leafage out but its still a bit cosy up there. thanks :) x xMilanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13032110602480436601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6207473389012123894.post-38730630505050632982009-05-14T12:54:00.000-07:002009-05-14T12:54:00.000-07:00It's a beautiful drawing! I think the perspective ...It's a beautiful drawing! I think the perspective is very inventive and you should keep it that way, however I think one of the reasons you think it looks odd maybe is cos the nose is drawn as if we're looking at it from the side - yet we are viewing the rest of freddie's face more or less from straight on. maybe if the nose was tweaked a lil bit it will make the perspective make more sense? <br />that be my friendly advice, feel free to ignore it though lol :)<br /><br />oh and as for the type, maybe do what cherry did with her type and have the image fade slightly around it ? it would create the illusion of more space. if you get me..<br /><br />nay xxxnaomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12743257201327735742noreply@blogger.com